Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Imagery Quickwrites: Chocolate Chip Cookies


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chocolate_chip_cookieeen

As I close my door (BANG), just getting home from a busy/stressful day at school, I start to smell something all to familiar and great. A sweet, and creamy smell. A smell that makes me feel comfortable and happy and warm inside as soon as I sniff it. My mouth starts salivating.

 While walking to my kitchen in a faster pace with a huge smile on my face, and cheeks still cold from the bitterness of the winters day, I hear the clang of the oven door closing. As I step through my kitchen I see a big silver cooling rack with a dozen cookies on top. My favourite food! The sight was just so beautiful, The golden brown thin flat cookie, with huge chunks of creamy milk choclate. You can tell they just came out of the oven because the steam was coming right off of them.

As my mom hands me a cup of warm hot chocolate she says in a very sympathetic voice,

"Hi honey, how was the rest of your day."

she  knew how stressed out and upset I was all day because I had been texting her for the majority of the day. I replied to her by saying

" (sigh) It was alright, still very stressful, but those cookies are starting to make it better" ending off with a smile.
 
"I thought I would surprise you by making your favourite snack, just wait a few more minutes because they are still hot! Another batch are in oven right now!"

I take a sip of the hot chocolate, it tastes so yummy. The temperture is just right not to hot not to cold, it warms my throat as it travels down to my stomach. I can tell by the creamy-ness that she put a little milk in it to cool it down, just how I like.

As I take my cup of hot chocolate and sit down on the soft cushion on the chair at my kitchen table my mom hands me over a plate with some cookies.

I tell her that the Hot choclate is fantastic.

"I made it a little bit earlier because I know you don't like it too hot" She replies with a huge smile on her face! She loves making people feel better, and I  can tell that she is happy that
 I am starting to feel a little better.

The cookie is warm when I pick it up. As I take a bite of it, I instantly feel joy spread across my whole body! Nice, soft, and very moist! I lick the little string of melting chocolate that was left on my lip off. Nothing makes me happier than my mothers cookies, she makes them absolutly amazing. So balanced with just enough sweet-ness and just enough chocolate chips.

shes asks "How are the cookies?"

I look at her with big eyes and a huge smile and say in a very enthusiastic voice "Amazing, thank you for everything mom, I love you."

"I love you too" She replies in a very loving, calm motherly voice.

"I love you too"

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